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Open Poetry #34

Old Style Romance - 2001

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2005-01-22 04:15 PM

Old Style Romance 2001 - 2003 I think I reviewed it. - may have released it

Your eyes dirty
Mascara running from tears you welcomed
Making you all the more beautiful
And human
Washing your cheeks and backbone
To flooding anguish
And things I could live with
To welcome a love ripping you apart
Bisecting you from all you valued
And all your family believed in
For something you didn't know existed
Love
Smiling grin, troubled eyes, knowledge, pain
Smiling my love
My love my smile
My love

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

1 posted 2005-01-22 04:49 PM

interesting write. why have you decided not to write i never read poetry before i came here. i just wrote it. i have over 300 writtings. most from before my time here. most of my writtings here where written at that time and moment. in begining from ones already written. i did not share my writtings before as fears kept my emotions an thoughts to myself. i am glad i was told of this place. it has given me growth and acceptance i appreciate your replies as well as all replies i get. it was nice meeting you but hopefully you will continue to write

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2005-01-23 11:44 PM

Enjoyed...James

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

3 posted 2005-01-24 12:00 PM

amazing the emotions we go through , yet amazing what love can do

Hope

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

4 posted 2005-01-24 01:00 PM

Very nice DavePage.

JL

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