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You color me Pretty
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You color me Pretty |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal 
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You color me pretty With pinks of pleasure And blues of sky You paint my gossamer wings That allow me to fly You gift me the golden sunlight That shines upon heart And the deep greens of living That encourages my art And when days fall gray Heavy with blackened rain You are my silver lining That shimmers all bright again Yes, love . . . You color me pretty With the Rainbow of you s.a.t. If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"You gift me the golden sunlight That shines upon heart And the deep greens of living That encourages my art And when days fall gray Heavy with blackened rain You are my silver lining That shimmers all bright again" Simply beautiful, Susan... I enjoyed the flow of this... "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
mmmm sxysuz..you color yourself with the colors that please my sigheyes thanks for the touch here lady |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
She comes in colors She's like a rainbow Coming, colors in the air Oh, everywhere She comes in colors. how nice to come in colors, how nice when a man can make you come in colors......... aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i want this man too please share  |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I love it. Dave |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Vlraynes - thank you most kindly D-  my amber runs for your blueInkked one -  Dave - thanks for your warm reply Hugs all -  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great write!! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you Alli dear - it is simple but full of the colors of feeling - am glad you enjoyed - SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
this was great does your fire burn? can you hear me? ILL JUST KNOCK THIS WALL RIGHT DOWN |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Loved this Susan...hope it was paisley. What...you're not talking about me? LOL! Okay...you're forgiven this time. (Sniff!) Truly did love it. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I like this susan! Juju |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
yes i enjoyed this |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ahh love shines in multicolor and you say it so beautifully! Love, Margherita |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Good morning my friends - and thank you all for the delight of seeing your touch here - it means a great deal to me and I so appreciate you all - Kevin - you crack me up - and you color me blushing - thanks for the smile Hugs all - SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you James - SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
what a lovely thought |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Lucky you to have found that tye of love.To feel it, to know it, you are blessed. marty |
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