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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2005-01-21 10:23 AM



From a thousand hearts,
I watch the death of me.
A prisoner of your own guilt,
Your mind is barren of all else.
A never-ending cycle-
Your reality is          gone.
Say goodbye to the life,
That you never           got to live.
Dead, gone, and lost to the world,
That you never did exist in anyway.

"Cuz I'm broken, when I'm lonesome, and I don't feel right when you're gone away..."~ Seether

"I shut my eyes and hold my cries to myself"~ Taproot

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2005-01-21 10:43 AM


*nodding head in understanding*
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2005-01-21 11:00 AM


You are writing extremely well

M

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

3 posted 2005-01-21 03:17 PM



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