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LeeJ
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0 posted 2005-01-21 08:27 AM


Ana Kata

Pressing flat back to song
Great empress molds limestone
Metering out daily life
A portion of wings developed
Light two-dimensional
Interactive potential
Cluster automation
Watching space
Where stars make believe
They are sphinxes
In a café endless

Fantasy fully dilated
Inheriting our heart
Wedded to tales of time
Wormhole of positive curvatures
Infinite numbers
Twisting séances reaching
Four dimensions
Where God lives
Fabric of our universe
Where time can be seen

Electromagnetism is felt
From a distance
In vivid clarity, realism and depth
Circumnavigating the globe
On a yacht of turning events
Leaking profusely
Into an ocean beyond


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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2005-01-21 08:36 AM



Fantasy fully dilated
Inheriting our heart
Wedded to tales of time
Wormhole of positive curvatures
Infinite numbers
Twisting séances reaching
Four dimensions
Where God lives
Fabric of our universe
Where time can be seen

Lee you always invoke such powerful
images with your words.  I love this.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2005-01-21 08:38 AM


LeeJ
Couldn't have said it better myself.
Good morning sweet.

Robert Frazier
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3 posted 2005-01-21 09:09 AM


wow, Lee, you've really woken me up with this one! powerful!

Rf

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2005-01-21 09:27 AM


there is a yacht in the marina named ana kata

I must go observe the owner now
and see if his eyes
know of that which you write

enjoyed you lee j

kayjay
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5 posted 2005-01-21 09:35 AM


What intriguing images you offer us!  Well done.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2005-01-21 09:36 AM


lovely
JL
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7 posted 2005-01-21 12:13 PM


Wonderful!
You have sculpted another marvelous
poem Lee J.

JL


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8 posted 2005-01-22 03:41 PM


wow  maybe we do see in the same doors
as you speak of what i have thought and seen


*Alli4000*
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9 posted 2005-01-22 07:14 PM


Amazing!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Ericc
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10 posted 2005-01-23 04:05 PM


Yes...amazing!

Eric

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