Open Poetry #34 |
First and maybe Last....Triolet.... |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
The dashing seas await release in roar and wash of daunting wave. As tides do fall in draining peace. The dashing seas await release until the water’s flow does cease and morsels find their salty grave The dashing seas await release in roar and wash of daunting wave. again....heh... Upon the rise of waxing moon and fall of dipper’s dribbling drop an owl does hoot the sleeping loon upon the rise of waxing moon before the fall of sugar’s spoon and spillage of the milky slop upon the rise of waxing moon and fall of dipper’s dribbling drop [This message has been edited by Magnus (01-19-2005 08:14 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A beautiful triolet Barry. Very well done. Have missed your words. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
2nd and 8th must rhyme, repeat.....mumble, mumble, mumble, grumble...sheesh.... BJ's master toilet....errrr, triolet |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
HEH.... Now do it again! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The dashing seas await release in roar and wash of daunting wave. As tides do fall in draining peace. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ upon the rise of waxing moon before the fall of sugar’s spoon Very nice writing, Barry. It is always such a pleasure to read you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, Well done my friend. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great write!!! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wonderful! Eric |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Wax on dear sir - your words are polished perfection - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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