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Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

0 posted 2005-01-21 12:34 PM

A word of truce

Slip into my mind one more time
Let us renew our rhythm

Forget not our past
But build on the last

Each foot of our foundation
Strengthening that new sensation

Keeping the simple hope
Regaining our visions scope

Two friends of written word
Without sharing would be absurd

So I call to you with a plea
Here I am on bended knee

A word of truce from me to you
For this is truly overdue

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2005-01-21 12:49 PM

Thomas~
I'll buy that !

Nice to see you~

*giggles* at your critique comment ...

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email [email protected]

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2005-01-21 07:37 AM

Slip into my mind one more time
Let us renew or rhythm

not sure if you meant "our" rhythm or not

enjoyed your thoughts...a compromise or truce...either way, a better course of action

M

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-01-21 09:04 AM

marvelous

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-01-21 09:21 AM

neat write

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2005-01-21 09:28 AM

Thomas,
I think she will buy that. Enjoyed.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2005-01-21 09:30 AM

Fantastic write Thomas!

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

7 posted 2005-01-21 09:37 AM

Thanks to all of you for your positive comments.

Oops
I did mean our let me fiix that.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

8 posted 2005-01-21 07:33 PM

GREAT WRITE!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

saved_by_grace
Member

since 2005-01-08

Posts 332
In the arms of God...

9 posted 2005-01-21 07:43 PM

This was a great write, Thomas!!

Thank you so much for sharing!!

Hugs,

Becka

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

10 posted 2005-01-21 10:05 PM

yes a nice write

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

11 posted 2005-01-22 03:22 AM

Again you bring a smile to my face

Thank you

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

12 posted 2005-01-23 10:47 AM

A brilliant offering here Thomas,
and what so many times is overlooked.
Enjoyed reading this today.
TD

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

13 posted 2005-01-23 10:51 AM

Truly captivating, dear Thomas!

You established the connection beautifully.

Love, Margherita

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

14 posted 2005-01-23 05:27 PM

Thank you
TD and Margherita
I am glad that you had the chance to read and reply
it is appreciated

Thomas

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