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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2005-01-20 04:21 PM



Enough Said


your cruelty
far surpasses
your kindness



© Copyright 2005 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
JL
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1 posted 2005-01-20 05:02 PM


Short, not too sweet, and to the point.

JL

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2005-01-20 06:01 PM


Nice...James
serenity blaze
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3 posted 2005-01-20 08:00 PM


This made me think of something...smile

Mandousian--a short sword (I believe of Spanish origin)

Short yes, but sharp

and you wield it well, ladyslick

DavePage
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4 posted 2005-01-20 08:17 PM


Do not cross a woman.

Dave

INclan
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5 posted 2005-01-20 08:34 PM


OUCH...
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
6 posted 2005-01-21 12:41 PM



You're so good at telling it like it is, lady slick~

jellybeans
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7 posted 2005-01-21 03:04 PM


sparsity does this well......good write
Gentle Spirit
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8 posted 2005-01-21 03:12 PM


I love it when you tell it like it is Helen,
and you do it soooo well!

James_A_Fraser
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9 posted 2005-01-21 03:16 PM


Short and --

-- no, not sweet....short and, uh, short!

And good to read, though hard too.



~~J

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
10 posted 2005-01-21 03:59 PM


ow.
*Alli4000*
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11 posted 2005-01-21 06:28 PM


:-\...

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

SmartChick
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12 posted 2005-01-21 10:18 PM


This is so true, Helen.
MGROVES
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13 posted 2005-01-21 10:23 PM


short and ouch! but i too, know this comes from a heart tired of the pain wanting love


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