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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Image of parting Course range finding voice To the top half of a window Recounting after words Like an autoharp Expecting a title from a book Until dawn... Until the dawn becomes prickly Counterpoised vignettes Choice burning at the steak At dinner tables of friends Yes…I whistle converted Standing on stilts Reaching for June In a closet full of new Busy days become mystical solstice Depicting accessible surreals In first person narratives The ebb and flow of jazz Becomes first hearing Egotism’s revenge Gripping communication In the hurting sobriety of oft quoted lines A host of menacing motions Arresting baroque & fine wine Examining all sides Of rippling skin Bloodthirsty architecture Opens through a maze Devouring labyrinth’s dismemberments While I dance on the leeward side of day’s new Holding tightly to that sensual woman Claustrophobic as she is... Her wanderlust patterns statement Concrete conveyances of what is... On the steep of things Essence finds the mind |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Emotional ending. Non-conclusive, to be confined to that maze, or conflicted on tearing down the walls or ripping a way out to a new day? I need help on this one. Very visual words, but I think I’m to thick-headed to get it. Help? JL  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hiya JL  Your not to thick headed, your not able to read minds...are you???? Anyway.... Emotional ending. Non-conclusive, to be confined to that maze, or conflicted on tearing down the walls or ripping a way out to a new day? emotions never end, they are up and down, over and around, spinning in a maze of sheer confrontation with self... they can tear down walls, or build them up or simply float on a new day...and whatever shall be will be? Capish? hehe Hugs and thanks for reading |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I knew that!@! No, not really. Thanks kid-o. JL |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I've read and reread - and thought of highlighting favorite lines, then gave up, there are just too many - enjoyed this muchly-  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
changing day to day, yes never figureing it out, i understand |
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