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Open Poetry #34

An Eye Watches

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2005-01-19 05:18 PM

An Eye Watches

Even though you feel a message
Wiped from a wall
Or hidden
An eye watches and a mind recalls
And time achieves its aim
Amongst the cries that are not forgotten
Nor does the world forget
For colour, race, creed, religion
As when we do
We play other games
And revenge is also
An eye for eye
But revenge is mine seethed all Political Lords

On a wall somewhere someone makes a sign
Maybe it will takes centuries
To know of that sign
And more centuries
To know of that language
And more centuries
To understand the words
And more centuries

To understand the thought

But

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2005-01-19 05:19 PM

But...

a thoughtful read~~

M

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2005-01-19 05:30 PM

Thanks Nakedthoughts.

I wrote in conjunction with what I felt was a banal poem in quality but it carried my thoughts of what some women are required to bear on a daily basis.

I will post the other.

Dave

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