Open Poetry #34 |
A love from Above |
jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
With a love that had need to share she reached from within safe confines but from fingers to heart his suspicions charred until her every move was singed the color that he expected it to be. From the burn habit traced recoil and as she sought refuge from his view of recompense she swore never, never again. Arms clasped tight her own power could not would not move them but with a Love from above she understood the reason to reach out again. ** * **thank you to the faithful few who believed that my muse would return and who cheered her every step of the way *s* |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"she understood the reason to reach out again." it is a leap of faith sometimes, to trust and to reach out again... really enjoyed this |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Never, ever doubt that your muse abandons you... S/he can't. S/he just knows when to take a vacation... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Arms clasped tight her own power could not would not move them but with a Love from above she understood the reason to reach out again. Amen!!!! Wonderfully written |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
thank you all...it has been lonely without writing, my pen is my friend *s* and I must say s/he did a great job of pretending to be gone......she had me convinced |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ah yes, but I have found that they like to trick us by making us think they are gone when they really are just on vacation. It is good to see you back among us and I hold you close in thought often. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
jellybeans I know the lonely feely of a lost muse. I'm so glad you found yours! |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Just Smile, it ain't hard to do. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great write! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Really, there was never any doubt...queries about WHEN maybe, but never ~whether~.... And this....it's a shame to say so in some ways and a glory in others....but your words here are absolutely true as well as being beautifully formed.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
May I ditto Ratleader? LOL (You know all about dittos... right? LOL) Seriously, my friend... I never doubted... your muse has been battered... but like your spirit... she isn't broken... just waiting for her chance to shine again. *S* And... here she is. *S* Beautiful!!! *S* |
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