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the world according to me
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the world according to me |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298
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An angry tempest spun this world that I called mine fueled by life’s shortcomings, plus my own selfish deceit I dizzied round and round in the world according to me. A gentle breath coursed a push in the opposite direction my trail of destruction now in clear view I have to say there was not a dry eye when I stood face to face with the world according to me. No longer standing tall barely able to kneel, not by my strength but by Grace instead repentance and I embrace- and oh how I thank you for the difference in the world according to Thee. Its been a few- the years do fly, mending the devastation is still ongoing. Some cleanup days grow to be weeks and its good that dedication is commanded, but oh how I thank you my Lord for leading my world according to Thee. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I have to say there was not a dry eye when I stood face to face with the world according to me. ~*~ You, me and Garp.   |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
well it ain't a pretty place when you realize you ain't as all that as you pretend to be.......*s* love you |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
jb....you rock my world! enjoyed...... Robert |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A gentle breath coursed a push in the opposite direction my trail of destruction now in clear view I have to say there was not a dry eye when I stood face to face with the world according to me. You have this way about you that makes me search out your words...  they always touch. Heart hugs, email me sometime ok? |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Awesome write!  ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
No longer standing tall barely able to kneel, not by my strength but by Grace instead repentance and I embrace- One beautiful constant in these conflicting worlds... your heart... *S* Not many have the courage to look at their own actions with the clarity you demand of yourself... You make us all stronger... better. *S* |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
RobertB, thank you...that has not been said to me lately about anything *g* gentlespirit, thank you, what a kind thing to say......and yep, email sent Ali, thank you suthern, ah lady, you always read me 'pretty'...even when I am not, thank you *s* |
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