Open Poetry #34 |
cold and alone |
aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
i think ive done something wrong my life just keeps getting worse my one true love left me, cold and alone my life means nothing to me right now only because he has left me cold and alone my flower of love wilted meaningless and thrown aside when she came back to you leaving me cold and alone my one, my love you have no idea how much you have hurt, broken, ripped and torn apart the fragile soul i so willingly gave to you to look after, care for and gently heal you have rendered me dead left me with nothing left me cold and alone i really dont know where this has come from but obviously something i needed to get out of my system... let me know any thoughts on this and how it can be improved..... not really sure i like it..... live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
it's very very emotional... I hope you are doing ok and realize, he isn't what makes you live...life isn't about living for another person... hope you are ok... |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
thankyou sea.... i am alright this happened about 3 months ago but for some reson something has brought it all up to the surface.... and it made me realise that i hadnt worked through my feelings properly and just bottled them up inside and ignored my warning signs to becoming depresed again... thankyou again for replying. Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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