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aussie teen
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since 2003-09-27
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0 posted 2005-01-19 08:34 AM


i think ive done something wrong
my life just keeps getting worse
my one true love
left me, cold and alone

my life means nothing
to me right now
only because he has left me
cold and alone

my flower of love wilted
meaningless and thrown aside
when she came back to you
leaving me cold and alone

my one, my love
you have no idea
how much you have hurt,
broken, ripped and torn
apart the fragile soul
i so willingly gave to you
to look after, care for
and gently heal

you have rendered me
dead
left me with
nothing
left me
cold and alone


i really dont know where this has come from but obviously something i needed to get out of my system... let me know any thoughts on this and how it can be improved.....
not really sure i like it.....

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

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1 posted 2005-01-19 02:31 PM


it's very very emotional...
I hope you are doing ok and realize, he isn't what makes you live...life isn't about living for another person...

hope you are ok...

aussie teen
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 396
Australia
2 posted 2005-01-20 08:09 AM


thankyou sea....
i am alright this happened about 3 months ago but for some reson something has brought it all up to the surface.... and it made me realise that i hadnt worked through my feelings properly and just bottled them up inside and ignored my warning signs to becoming depresed again...
thankyou again for replying.
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

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