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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
(Inspired by Dickinson) So I haven’t said the words, Or many for you to hear. Time you would not give me. Too few moments, interfere. My talk was ever spacious, And riddled with much naught. You hurried on away from My hidden mystery’s thought. I could not speak quicker Or quick enough, I guess. My pain only comes from lost chances to confess. _____ Words hadn’t come quick enough My time spun all too fast. You, improvident, guessed you knew me And let lost thoughts run past. __________ [This message has been edited by Endlessecho (01-18-2005 11:20 AM).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
Truly feeling this one..great write! hugs, g "Everybody just wants to get high...sit and watch a perfect world go by..." (T.McGraw) |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was both sad and beautiful.... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
very graceful strutting through your words |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You know? Sometimes I think that we interpret silence as a harbenger of bad...when in fact, a thoughtfulness lingers that is far more considerate than accomodating. Would wish I had known, if it were me. Great write. TD |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Love this!  ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
TD: Thank you! You wonderfully worded exactly what I was attempting to express. Thank you for understanding. Yes, if only.. |
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