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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-01-18 11:23 AM


It's not too late (I tell myself)
when scrolling through your words.
I rhyme a little here and there
in case aloud, I'm heard.

In silent eyes, I view the world,
my fears to put aside.
Especially when the touch of you
brings out my inward hide.

Each moment lost is one I've gained
in learning patient's tool.
Translating time into the now
and all the past to spool...

Round and round and round we go
or maybe it's just I.
Halfway there, and halfway here,
it's not too late, I sigh~~


M
(just some rhyming fun)

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2005 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-01-18 01:34 PM


Each moment lost is one I've gained
in learning patient's tool.
Translating time into the now
and all the past to spool...

well in your fun, your giving many smiles to us, as well....loved this...thank you

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia
2 posted 2005-01-18 02:36 PM


Love the way your feelings translate , I often feel between here and there

Hope

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
3 posted 2005-01-18 03:00 PM


And you rhyme mighty fine

Enjoyed this -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
4 posted 2005-01-18 03:15 PM


You have such a way with rhyme and reason, and this is no exception!

Just lovely, Maureen~

MGROVES
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california
5 posted 2005-01-18 03:21 PM


yes indeed, lovely


SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
6 posted 2005-01-18 09:05 PM


Well, this is very good, my friend. Hope you are doing well.
passing shadows
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