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Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2004-11-13 11:37 PM

So basic was the vow I broke
and so complex, the promise spoke
that love sincere, on whispered breath
to young, so shy, a subtle death

so wonder now, one moment real?
or half a life lost, so surreal
It may be only pain you feel
but half your life, in laughter
Keeps it real.

because I remember every day
you made me feel

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2004-11-13 11:43 PM

sad -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2004-11-14 12:06 PM

OH, Jason
need a big hug?

a well done painful write

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

3 posted 2004-11-14 12:39 PM

wow -- very moving words. Hope to read more from you.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2004-11-14 10:56 AM

rhyming's overrated....

your thoughts came thru here very vividly,with feeling, rhyming or rhymeless

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2004-11-14 03:26 PM

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

6 posted 2005-01-18 11:42 AM

sad one...

hugs, g

"Everybody just wants to get high...sit and watch a perfect world go by..." (T.McGraw)

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

7 posted 2005-01-18 11:52 AM

Jason, the first two lines of this one define it all. Well done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2005-01-18 11:55 AM

That just flung me backwards a few years...

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

9 posted 2005-01-18 09:15 PM

too long since last i saw your name up here. wb

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2005-01-18 09:16 PM

yeah...sigh

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