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Tears |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida 
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Tears that slowly trickle down your quiet cheek, Cause mine to form and puddle at the ridges of my eyes. To see you wince with pain ,either physical or emotional, I do not know, because as yet you cannot speak, Sends sharp edged sword like stabs of pain into my heart. For you at thirty five, are still my last born and I treasure you. July 28 2005 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marty, stark images... I knew you could write... I can see why you thought you couldn't... it's hard, I know... but it helps.  |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
 This shows such a deep love,that shines far above and beyond the words that are on this screen. And the words, still, are excellent! Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
You can really see the love in this! very nice.. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Thank you Sunshine for your belief in me. And GG. Yes, love of a mom for her child is never ending. A commitment of love that lasts eternally. best, marty |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Endless Echo, You popped in so fast. Thank you for your kindness. marty |
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