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latearrival
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0 posted 2005-01-18 09:06 AM



Tears that slowly trickle down your quiet cheek,
Cause mine to form and puddle at the ridges of my eyes.
To see you wince with pain ,either physical or emotional,
I do not know, because as yet you cannot speak,
Sends sharp edged sword like stabs of pain into my heart.
For you at thirty five, are still my last born and I treasure you.
July 28 2005

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-01-18 09:19 AM



Marty, stark images...
I knew you could write...
I can see why you thought you couldn't...

it's hard, I know...
but it helps.


GG
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2 posted 2005-01-18 09:22 AM


This shows such a deep love,
that shines far above and beyond
the words that are on this screen.
And the words, still, are excellent!

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Endlessecho
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3 posted 2005-01-18 09:48 AM


You can really see the love in this! very nice..
latearrival
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4 posted 2005-01-18 09:55 AM


Thank you Sunshine for your belief in me. And GG. Yes, love of a mom for her child is never ending. A commitment of love that lasts eternally. best, marty
latearrival
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5 posted 2005-01-18 10:25 AM


Endless Echo, You popped in so fast. Thank you for your kindness. marty
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