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loverly thral |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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side to side we faced the trees we were skys to them from under their barking limbs that waved at strangers to quick come see the mud of love when it reaches under the brim of a lifeway stream and feels the minnows swim through finger minutes that close to grasp in slow motion the slippery of time, and not to fast lest it damns the dam and stops a moment before it births a daydream tomorrow ______________ Dark |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I see your savoring the music today...and you've given me some very palladable thoughts to ponder....love your mind D....and your love arms...which are like roots of Ash trees...an entire forest of love.... Hugs |
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IndigoEve Member
since 2003-01-10
Posts 279Etched in the illusion of time |
This simply is. It doesn't need any other words to define its purpose. I hope you don't mind if I keep it, though.  If I were to touch you, would you bleed a velvet river, running miracles through the sodden ground? --Moi |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
and stops a moment before it births a daydream tomorrow That last line is friggin incredible D. But then, you already knew I would love this one right?  The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A landsliding poem... over the byhighways where the quick come look could never see tomorrow if staid, too long... I've always seen the middle of it, and the after-effects... never have I been there in the slow start of quick pickup tumble down... however, I have felt the earth move. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i would love to birth your baby |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Words fail me for the loverly of this D - and the warm it makes me feel - what beauty you create - I feel as if I look through the misted veil that hovers at the base of a cascade of the incredible - Love this -  SIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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