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Thomas119gold
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0 posted 2005-01-17 11:45 PM



Light in the darkness


I have become corrupt
My soul lost to the other side
Your love seems to interrupt
Being my only saving guide

We walk a thin line
Between heaven and hell
Seemingly we are intertwined
Our love a resounding bell

You with your true intentions
Me with my selfish ways
Without your intervention
I would be lead astray

As crucial moments tick away
For my sake I hope in your direction
Before what is left of me decays
Because in the end you are my resurrection

[This message has been edited by Thomas119gold (01-18-2005 12:13 AM).]

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1 posted 2005-01-18 02:57 AM


i really like the way you express yourself
you have a way with words


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2 posted 2005-01-18 05:22 AM


great format! excellent theme!

love this! yes

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3 posted 2005-01-18 06:26 AM


wonderful....except may I add this...no one can shall we say change another....that's a mighty hefty expectation to place on someone else's shoulders, be it mom, dad, boyfriend, girlfrind....one must care for and respect himself...then, they will do so by others...and no one but you, can change that?  And if you want it bad enough...her bad enough, you will, especially when, one realizes how terribly you can touch others negatively.  We are one within all, each a part of the other, what you do to you, effects us all, and what you do to others, to hurt them, may not only corrode them for life, but also hurt yourself two fold.  

See?  Hugs and best regards...enjoyed the read.

Thomas119gold
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4 posted 2005-01-18 04:55 PM


Life is crazy and sometimes by writing it out you can express that emotion to help heal and learn. The plus about this website is that all comments are welcome because I can learn from them.
So thank you

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