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Light in the darkness
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Light in the darkness |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) 
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Light in the darkness I have become corrupt My soul lost to the other side Your love seems to interrupt Being my only saving guide We walk a thin line Between heaven and hell Seemingly we are intertwined Our love a resounding bell You with your true intentions Me with my selfish ways Without your intervention I would be lead astray As crucial moments tick away For my sake I hope in your direction Before what is left of me decays Because in the end you are my resurrection [This message has been edited by Thomas119gold (01-18-2005 12:13 AM).] |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
i really like the way you express yourself you have a way with words  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great format! excellent theme! love this! yes |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
wonderful....except may I add this...no one can shall we say change another....that's a mighty hefty expectation to place on someone else's shoulders, be it mom, dad, boyfriend, girlfrind....one must care for and respect himself...then, they will do so by others...and no one but you, can change that? And if you want it bad enough...her bad enough, you will, especially when, one realizes how terribly you can touch others negatively. We are one within all, each a part of the other, what you do to you, effects us all, and what you do to others, to hurt them, may not only corrode them for life, but also hurt yourself two fold. See? Hugs and best regards...enjoyed the read. |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Life is crazy and sometimes by writing it out you can express that emotion to help heal and learn. The plus about this website is that all comments are welcome because I can learn from them. So thank you |
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