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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2004-10-21 04:18 PM



"Still Growing Up"

I walk unbroken
for the fith moment
to travel a far
and to reach heaven

A child still lost
reaching womenhood
I still slip and fall
Cry out and complain

Perhaps misguided
I seek some reason.
With out some truth
We all go crazy


Juju-

Time to work some good juju!


© Copyright 2004 Juju - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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1 posted 2004-10-22 04:47 AM


A child still lost
reaching womenhood


seems I have been here too long, m'self
nice writing

Juju
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In your dreams
2 posted 2004-10-22 01:41 PM


thankyou
dgvarner
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3 posted 2005-01-17 01:36 PM


I think it takes the whole of each life to truly and fully "grow up"...

enjoyed

hugs, g

"Everybody just wants to get high...sit and watch a perfect world go by..." (T.McGraw)

Juju
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In your dreams
4 posted 2005-01-17 02:30 PM


Thankyou! wow you looked up this one wow.

Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2005-01-18 04:56 PM


Nice writing...reminded me of the song...Back To Innocense...James
Juju
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6 posted 2005-01-18 05:44 PM


Thank you Micheal

Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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