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Shearling
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Shearling |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Then to be the lamb Searching with angora eyes: The vertical dawn of a silent rendering We, similar beings, tenderly paw the snow Sipping thoughts of milk Nipping dreams of raven moonlight Tripping merrily in light foot fleet of meadow fodder Itinerant the cottonwood of heart and memory And I knew, in a second breath the soft When spring left quietly beneath a winter drape That you would come, bidding castanet awakening And your hands would flank eternity in one long and lingered stroke As I, the lamb, would trust the shear of a safe and painless take Copyright Kkh 01/16/05 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
As I, the lamb, would trust the shear of a safe and painless take ~*~ Is this what it means, to be a lamb? I would leave a sound behind me... as beautiful as you make it seem... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
One might think of Samson and a certain lady. Though somewhat in reverse... This is an awesome write. It feels fantastic. Love the words, the vision in my mind...all of it. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
your always so easy to read...let alone the visuals you capture...wonderfully written |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
very creative write! I always love the meshing or comparison of two subjects expressed as one...your writings are beautifully cryptic and creative. |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
bravo my friend nicely done once again |
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