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coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

0 posted 2005-01-16 08:28 PM

Love blew through on the wind
carrying the scent of pine and rock
roaring like the waters of wild canyons
wet with spring’s abandonment
we loved like avalanche and torrent
consumed
destroyed
renewed
and I became part of her echo
left fading
against the mountainside

"If at first an idea is not absurd, there is no hope for it."
Albert Einstein

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-01-16 08:29 PM

It's about time you got in here...
and this? How timely...
how worldly...

Yes!

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2005-01-16 08:30 PM

"we loved like avalanche and torrent
consumed
destroyed
renewed
and I became part of her echo"

*SIGH*
I love this part...
beautiful

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2005-01-16 08:32 PM

nice..

very nice.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

4 posted 2005-01-16 09:11 PM

Thanks, Karilea. For reading and for the very kind comments. I'm in Open!

Thank You, Susan. A sigh from you is very sweet indeed.

Thanks also, Susan C. Your comments too are very nice.

Billy 8)

"If at first an idea is not absurd, there is no hope for it."
Albert Einstein

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2005-01-16 09:57 PM

Magnificent write!
TD

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

6 posted 2005-01-16 10:33 PM

Thanks very much for your kindness, TD.

CB 8)

"If at first an idea is not absurd, there is no hope for it."
Albert Einstein

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

7 posted 2005-01-19 11:11 PM

Wow -- what a ride! You did good.....

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coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

8 posted 2005-01-20 07:35 PM

Thanks, Ratleader.

As usual this isn't the "final" version.

All are works in progress.

Come to think of it, so am I, lol.

If anybody wants to see the final, just email me.

CB 8)

"If at first an idea is not absurd, there is no hope for it."
Albert Einstein

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