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vlraynes
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2005-01-16 08:25 PM




abstraction of an
afterthought
in circumspect of
circlescape

a maze
of toppled
walls and
rubble -
shattering of
glass in
double mirroring
through sliding doors and
windows paned with
memories...

now buried
'neath a
layering of
rhythm in the
quickening of
metronome and
moon in 'shine'
in perfect
measuring of
time

unceasing...

pausing not
to see the
shimmer
glow of
innocence in
childish eyes of
should have been
in vision of
what could have been...

but never came to be
because...

somewhere along the
road to old
a disillusioned
heart grew cold...

Peter pawned his
frying Pan
for bus fare
out of Never Land...
Dorothy's Oz was
just a dream and
clicking thrice
won't take you home


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Repost...
because I can't write...
but I can copy and paste...


© Copyright 2005 Vicky L. Raynes - All Rights Reserved
Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
1 posted 2005-01-16 08:29 PM


"somewhere along the
road to old
a disillusioned
heart grew cold...

Peter pawned his
frying Pan
for bus fare
out of Never Land...
Dorothy's Oz was
just a dream and
clicking thrice
won't take you home"


Well, I never saw it before and I am very glad you can copy and paste because this is outstanding!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2005-01-16 08:34 PM


You CAN write...
this proves it.

You just need a one-way ticket back
for that vacationing muse...

Honey, I've been reposting, too...

it's a struggle, some days...

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-17-2005 01:45 PM).]

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
3 posted 2005-01-16 08:45 PM


cut and paste

cool..........

glad you did

Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
4 posted 2005-01-16 11:09 PM


Hi Vicky..it is very good to see you....!  I have done alot of reposting lately, because I've been muse depleted also.  Don't worry...it will come back to you....Loved this.  
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
5 posted 2005-01-17 01:29 AM


Vicky, it's always a treat to read your poems!  .......jo
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
6 posted 2005-01-17 05:27 AM


I know what you mean
I'm having trouble lately writing too

reposts are good though, much needed sometimes

dgvarner
Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
7 posted 2005-01-17 01:29 PM


very cool   love the way this one's put together!

hugs, g

"Everybody just wants to get high...sit and watch a perfect world go by..." (T.McGraw)

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