Open Poetry #34 |
Circlescape |
vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
abstraction of an afterthought in circumspect of circlescape a maze of toppled walls and rubble - shattering of glass in double mirroring through sliding doors and windows paned with memories... now buried 'neath a layering of rhythm in the quickening of metronome and moon in 'shine' in perfect measuring of time unceasing... pausing not to see the shimmer glow of innocence in childish eyes of should have been in vision of what could have been... but never came to be because... somewhere along the road to old a disillusioned heart grew cold... Peter pawned his frying Pan for bus fare out of Never Land... Dorothy's Oz was just a dream and clicking thrice won't take you home _________________ Repost... because I can't write... but I can copy and paste... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"somewhere along the road to old a disillusioned heart grew cold... Peter pawned his frying Pan for bus fare out of Never Land... Dorothy's Oz was just a dream and clicking thrice won't take you home" Well, I never saw it before and I am very glad you can copy and paste because this is outstanding! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You CAN write... this proves it. You just need a one-way ticket back for that vacationing muse... Honey, I've been reposting, too... it's a struggle, some days... [This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-17-2005 01:45 PM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
cut and paste cool.......... glad you did |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Vicky..it is very good to see you....! I have done alot of reposting lately, because I've been muse depleted also. Don't worry...it will come back to you....Loved this. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Vicky, it's always a treat to read your poems! .......jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know what you mean I'm having trouble lately writing too reposts are good though, much needed sometimes |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very cool love the way this one's put together! hugs, g "Everybody just wants to get high...sit and watch a perfect world go by..." (T.McGraw) |
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