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Could This Be Real?
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Could This Be Real? |
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Lonely Shadow Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 128Virginia 
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precious beauty beyond compare let my eyes be not cheated by this radiant angel before me is this but a dream, could this be real? could such a woman exist? then your gentle smile is brought to life and my heart once hardened by winter's icy chill slowly melts away, feeling love's gentle warmth long since forgotten I've become ensnared by your eyes so kind and loving losing myself in those gentle pools feeling nothing else, but your presence so close you are to me I pray to god above let this be real then feelings you gentle touch my heart beating for dear life almost terrified I've become frozen solid, unable to move unable to speak, unable to breathe then upon my cheek, kiss you lay so carefully then once again your smile oh god, please let me stay let me stay in this moment let not this angel flee my sight but to know her loving presence and to feel her loving touch Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
this is really nice  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
With poetry like that, you shouldn't be lonely at all. What heart! What a poem! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great write!  ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
it's easy to feel the emotion through your words. "so I wait for you like a lonely house |
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