Open Poetry #34 |
Another season |
mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Rays through a morning’s eye, splitting- sand latent columns of delinquencies. Another day brought by a fiendish time. In another season follows me in color. Should awakening knowledge of your presence be as mine? Your face sunken, hiding - if you will, And leave me the unexplained delinquencies of another day, we cough by. Another season till I wish as I close my eye’s. Just to see you. Where reality doe’s not know, do I? If nothing is something |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
whewww know the feeling, this one hit home... Hey, why hasn't anyone else read this one yet... Your going right back up to the top, no one should miss this one Magnificanct write |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Quality Dave |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
High quality! I think this got caught up in the masquerade storm we had here lately...needs a bump |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
thanx wranx for bringing this back as always, Wayne, you leave us with a pondering good write |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
mysticpoe/Wayne You do have a way of writing that says something I can't explain, but in such a way that I feel it anyway. Enjoyed this! |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
LeeJ, Thanks for starting this one for me. I greatly appreciate your kindness. Thanks so much again. Dave, Thanks for your extremely up-lifting response. I'm so glad you took the time to stop by. Thanks again. wranx, your support has meant so much to me. Thank you for the BUMP!! Midnitesun, your continued support has given me newly found inspirational reasons for using the pen - since you came on board during my last few writes. Thank you for all your MUCH appreciated reads and comments. Martie, what a beautiful comment!! To be understood in such a very sincere way. Thank you so much for stopping by. Again, Thanks to you all, VERY MUCHHH!! wayne If nothing is something |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Yes, very nice. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
an awesome write...glad I stopped by |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
great write...much said even between the lines |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Susan, passing shadows and hoot_owl, thank you for stopping and taking the time to read and comment. Thanks again, wayne If nothing is something |
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