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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Forever Forever is not built of time But stays within a blanks sublime Its features not dark or light yet The possibility of might I speak of nothing that became Of time and reason and the aim Where Eden and our hells flimflam Began within the words I am And all that has became exist Though framed within a world of mist Where rhyme and time began the new That bathes you in each morning’s dew For here within our gift of time We struggle to refined sublime A place of neither dark nor light But nothingness that is the might That is the paradox my friend We seek to fly to nothings end |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
good morning sir your wise words are always a welcome pleasure especially when thoughts in ones head are on same thoughts and senses |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Where Eden and our hells flimflam Began within the words I am ~*~ You and Ice are poets of like mind in these early Saturday hours...   |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderfully wise words once again dear Seymour. Hugs to you, Chris You said you'd give me light- |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes Sir Sy, we do, don't we? A never ending quest and saga... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sy, Sy, Sy... there are so many lines in this that are so poetically profound and just flat out cadenced in COOL...each couplet stands on it on wisdom ... Forever is not built of time But stays within a blanks sublime Its features not dark or light yet The possibility of might I speak of nothing that became Of time and reason and the aim Where Eden and our hells flimflam Began within the words I am And all that has became exist Though framed within a world of mist ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ That is the paradox my friend We seek to fly to nothings end ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ youre just too cool for school and Im your rhyme loving fool...lol  Where rhyme and time began the new me thinks your rhymes are enscribed on the other side.  *ww*   Among the kingdom of the winds ... |
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saved_by_grace Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332In the arms of God... |
I think that I have to agree with what Janet said... Quite beautiful, Sy!!  Becka |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES I thank you much. Sunshine Thank you sweet. Chris, Thank you dear and hugs back. Barry, The saga will end but I do believe will begin again. JM, I can't tell you how your understanding keeps my wings alive and flapping. Winkiewinkie Stinky saved_by_grace I never disagree with JM, thank you. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
That is the paradox my friend We seek to fly to nothings end What can I say except you are a darn smart cookie! Carpe' Diem |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beauty seems to flow effortlessly from your fingers. Eric |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, You mean a vanilla cookie, LOL. Ericc LOL not exactly, thank you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Where Eden and our hells flimflam Began within the words I am Randy said to tell you hes still smiling over this one. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy ....A wonderful poem!!! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
this is why the Moon and Mars is not enough enough so millions more goes onto finding atmosphere on Titian..esp liked the last couplet [This message has been edited by ecrivan (01-15-2005 09:52 PM).] |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
came by for another visit |
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