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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2005-01-14 08:19 PM

Leisurely they stalked the moon’s darkness
in pale light of peppered stars. Lacing strings
of brilliance with cool, deft fingertips as icy comets
chased an invisible horizon.

It was there beneath the ebb that a kiss
lingered and hearts strummed melodiously to a tune
of fervent sighs.

It was there, beneath towering rocks that sand
trails traced a lover’s dance in wait the dawn’s chill
as a blanket fell on rising flesh.

And as eyes closed ever slowly against the twinkle
of a dipper’s drip, the owl cried...awaiting a rustle
amongst a solitary tree’s slender tendrils...that
a moonlight sonata might again be played....
before the eyes of howl bay a waxing moon’s
plea...and a kiss awakes the dawn once more.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2005-01-14 08:33 PM

"And as eyes closed ever slowly against the twinkle
of a dipper’s drip, the owl cried...awaiting a rustle
amongst a solitary tree’s slender tendrils...that
a moonlight sonata might again be played....
before the eyes of howl bay a waxing moon’s
plea...and a kiss awakes the dawn once more."

Ahhh Barry,...you know this is one huge sigh of a write!!
Excellent...so very much enjoyed!
Hugs~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
an invincible summer.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2005-01-14 08:51 PM

What I love so much about your poetry is I feel as if I am there - okay, then I love the beauty of the words and the feel of them upon my thoughts - yeah, okay, well I also think they're wonderfully romantic - I could go on - love this my friend - you are so very talented -

Hugs -