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Robert Frazier
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since 2003-02-06

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0 posted 2005-01-14 02:55 PM

Diamonds in a black sky, fill your eyes with light,
shine the way for dreamers,
like beacons in the night.

Raindrops gather heavy, like magic in your hand,
forming circles as they fall,
around your fingers, band.

Pregnant hive of honey, flowing from your tongue,
serenade of beauty,
as no chorus ever sung.

Come in waves of beauty, quench my thirsty shore.
If thoughts of you were ocean,
I'd drown forevermore.

© Copyright 2005 Robert Frazier - All Rights Reserved

JL
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since 2004-04-01

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1 posted 2005-01-14 02:57 PM

What a great love song!
Enjoyed

JL

Sunshine

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2 posted 2005-01-14 02:58 PM

This is beautiful, Robert!

Susan
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walking the surreal

3 posted 2005-01-14 03:17 PM

Oh my - to this I must sigh -

stunning

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

SEA

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with you

4 posted 2005-01-14 07:21 PM

yes! this is just perfect...I am keeping this one!
LOVE IT!

*Alli4000*

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5 posted 2005-01-14 08:10 PM

Great write!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Susan
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walking the surreal

6 posted 2005-01-16 12:02 PM

Okay, back for seconds - so very nice - yes indeedy-

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Susan Caldwell
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7 posted 2005-01-16 09:05 PM

Wonderful!!

Truly a beautiful writing..

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

saved_by_grace
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8 posted 2005-01-16 09:19 PM

WOW...how beautiful your words!! This is definitely a KEEPER!! Thanks for sharing!

...Becka

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9 posted 2005-01-16 10:52 PM

wonderful!

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