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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-01-14 08:06 AM



today is anothering
of a phone call misdialed
you said you were a mess
and were amiss in naughty calling
but had obligations
as you called them

but with me they are fun
with four letters sometimes
and strings attached
of yes's and mores
til the pores are done
with the rain of our lovers

small talk is a large part
of the miscommunication
that we both look forward to
since we both are too proper
to talk with our mouths full
but to hungry not to feed

the need we both prepare
laboring long hours
over ours in hopes the other
has more than the other
so the last one standing
can say do you still love me

and the other can only smile

_________________

Dark

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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-01-14 08:11 AM


sounds like we're on the same frequency this morn....

sad penning, but wonderfully thought, felt and expressed

Morning sir...   wishing you a fine day

Hugs Dark...

Lee J.

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2005-01-14 08:19 AM


Very melancholic, but such a powerful psychological write!
Love, Margherita

Catrina
Member
since 2004-11-10
Posts 132

3 posted 2005-01-14 08:30 AM



It sounds as if your heart
beats a little faster
when you see the numbers
flash by...

You leave smiles with this.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2005-01-14 08:53 AM


small talk and miscommunication...

yeah...I know that well

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

5 posted 2005-01-14 09:15 AM


smiles indeed.....

and only you can bring forth this smile.  

dug it babe

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
6 posted 2005-01-14 10:38 AM


amga byauroei  ghaoe u baohei hth

Oh, excuse me, my mouth was full-

small talk weaves fine lines of connection that allow for the spanning of hearts to connect in woven mesh - it is the strings upon which the tapestry is woven - little insights into the every day, like sprinkles upon ice cream - the ice cream is the best part, but the sprinkles are fun and add just that much more delight - feel you D -

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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