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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2005-01-13 11:29 AM



    I feel the soft brush of leather
     against my skin
     as we entwine
     to begin the dance.

     Violins play softly
     for this dance of pleasure.
     You lift me higher
     into my dream state
     as lips lightly
      linger with desire.

     The music stirs passion
     building deep within,
     my hands touch leather edges
     as yours feel the soft of lace..

     and the dance continues.


{revised slightly on 01-13-05}


The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2005-01-13 11:31 AM


Gentle,
A sexy write, enjoyed.

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2 posted 2005-01-13 11:37 AM


yes, very sultry
and enjoyed watching this dance

JL
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3 posted 2005-01-13 11:41 AM


Very nice visual, physically attractive song.

JL

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4 posted 2005-01-13 11:46 AM



In need,
indeed
it does!

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5 posted 2005-01-13 12:00 PM


Softly  sensual Donna and much enjoyed the music.
Hugs~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
an invincible summer.

Martie
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6 posted 2005-01-13 01:42 PM


Donna

Leather and lace dance well together!  

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7 posted 2005-01-13 01:52 PM


And the floor melted beneath your feet.

Lovely words, said in love, and feeling.

Dave

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8 posted 2005-01-13 02:06 PM


"if music be the food of love ... play on"

Lovely Donna. hugs, Chris

You said you'd give me light-
But you never told me about the fire
Stevie Nicks

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9 posted 2005-01-13 02:09 PM


A beautiful "dance of pleasure", sweet lady.
hugs,
Ethel

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10 posted 2005-01-13 02:40 PM


Ooooh Donna - I like this - the texture, the sensuality -

Susan

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11 posted 2005-01-13 03:24 PM


Beautiful dance...beautiful words.

Eric

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12 posted 2005-01-13 03:37 PM


"give to me your leather, take from me my lace"

Stevie and what's his name?

Absolutely lovely Donna

Mxx

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

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13 posted 2005-01-13 04:31 PM


Filled with gentle sensuality...

Margherita
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14 posted 2005-01-13 06:16 PM


A great ouverture, dear Donna.

Beautiful!

Love, Margherita

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15 posted 2005-01-13 06:17 PM


mmmm... never did own much leather..or lace... lol

but do have to say i have a preference for the lace....

sultry ma'am... sultry

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16 posted 2005-01-13 06:46 PM


I love this!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Gentle Spirit
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17 posted 2005-01-14 10:59 AM


Time is short for me right now and I
just wanted to pop in and say thanks to all.  

Chuckling at Ron, cuz now I'm wondering
just what shade of lace you prefer?     

ROTFLMAO

Thanks all and have a GREAT friday!


The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

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