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Open Poetry #34

in slow translation

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2005-01-14 04:41 AM

"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache"
p.neruda

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2005-01-14 06:27 AM

love it...

each word rises with ease to the lips

M

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

2 posted 2005-01-14 06:35 AM

LOVE IT! Mmm now this is sensual. What a gift to wake up to this morning! Thank-you very much sweetie. Love you!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-01-14 07:25 AM

Marvelous painting...enjoyed

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2005-01-14 08:07 AM

you know the metal of this
makes me peel my skin
and beg for chrome

enjoy you ms

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2005-01-14 08:23 AM

Impressive in words and presentation!

... and passionate too.

Love, Margherita

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2005-01-14 08:44 AM

take me when you go

wow!

just awesome!

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

7 posted 2005-01-14 05:55 PM

Beautiful just beautiful Snow.

:-)

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

8 posted 2005-01-14 06:49 PM

you've become a master of sensuality. excellent write

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

9 posted 2005-01-14 06:52 PM

Awesome!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

10 posted 2005-01-14 11:36 PM

This has slipped to far down the page and I am not ready to let it slip into memory yet. Back to the top it goes!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

11 posted 2005-01-15 01:21 AM

You unfurled your language in a way beyond words in this one!

......jo

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

12 posted 2005-01-18 08:15 PM

As always....you shine in the dark.

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