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Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2005-01-13 07:22 PM



Feelin’ useless,
Lied to and abused,
How can you say those things?-
That got me feelin’ so confused.
What did I ever do to you?
Please, I’d really like to know,
What made you run away?
Why did you suddenly have to go?
The pain is so intense now,
I can’t take it like before.
You hurt me with those words,
That kept me crawling back for more.
More and more of this torture,
My soul won’t rest until I have it.
And though my mind keeps saying no,
My heart won’t let me quit.
Because I know, once upon a time,
You used to care and love me.
While my heart is in two pieces,
I’ll make my final plea.

“I know I am the best for you,
Forget the things in the past.
I know we can be one again,
I know we can make it last.”

"Cuz I'm broken, when I'm lonesome, and I don't feel right when you're gone away..."~ Seether

"I shut my eyes and hold my cries to myself"~ Taproot

© Copyright 2005 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2005-01-13 07:24 PM


Staci, these could be song lyrics....liked the rhythm.  
scorpio
Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178
right...there
2 posted 2005-01-14 09:35 PM


I have to agree with Iliana.  There's a song to be sung here.

believe in what your heart feels...

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