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Open Poetry #34

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DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2005-01-13 03:56 PM

Turned up there one morning said, "I'd been pushing snow"
Any chance of job
I'm desperate to show

Why haven't you got cards
Lost in the post
Finished off the snow
Payments a bit of a joke

Guy said "been there before, job shifting bread"
Start at 6.00 finish by 19.00 - food in the canteen given something to you

Hauling the trolleys 6 foot high and packed
Holes in the floor
Impact was on your stack

Never lost a bun
Picked them up and back
Pushing wheels out of holes
Never looking back

Cracked cups in a small room
Football team starting
Tried on a day off
To help a friend

And parted

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2005-01-13 04:00 PM

Sounds like a busy day.
Feel like I need a rest now…
Enjoyed DavePage.

JL

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

2 posted 2005-01-13 11:43 PM

Hey Dave,
I like this one too.

:-)

Within this heart you'll find love

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2005-01-14 03:06 PM

Thanks JL and Froggy

I just wanted to finish off something.

It dovetails me into another bit of lightly.

Dave

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