Open Poetry #34 |
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"How to hide the ..lack of feel" ( inspired) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines ![]() |
"How to hide the ..lack of feel" (title borrowed from pandonov...thank you) This one inch that is saved from ache hides that lack of feel. Simple thoughts catch my days breathe my sighs, rise a smile that angles itself in questioning the words I don't hear, the touch I don't feel, the lack of the real. So I turn back the clock rewinding film showing the age as I am cast out into the morning emptiness, fogged by contradiction, lost in soulful music waiting for that other shoe to drop... M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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MGROVES![]() ![]()
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
wow i do feel this one |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
maybe go shoelesss? i don't know, but i do so understand ![]() |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I think, we shouldn't be afraid to express what we feel...cuz, this way, ya never know, the alternative is rejection, which is not such a bad thing, when you weigh the never knowing with it wasn't supposed to be's? Tremendous way to express these feelings. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
M, this touches |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
..understood |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
So much said and expressed in a way so easy to feel. ![]() |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
![]() ![]() If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
![]() wonderfully said. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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*Alli4000*![]()
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Wow.... ![]() ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is felt and understood. ![]() Mxx all I can taste is this moment, all I can breathe is your life, cause sooner or later it's over, I just don't want to miss you tonight.~GooGooDolls~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
powerful . . . makes me ache! Rf |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
wow..big feeling in the lack of feel.... hugs, g "Everybody just wants to get high...sit and watch a perfect world go by..." (T.McGraw) |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
He's hard to ignore, isn't he! An essential dynamism there..... ....and here. This is excellent, though hard to read because my heart goes out to the poet at the same time the cool assessor of poetry in me likes what he sees. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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