Open Poetry #34 |
The Confession |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
There’s an overload of sensing when one is feeling pain, Like the pounding in a thunder cloud before release of rain. Your eyes are out of focus and you cannot hear what’s said, You want to shut the world out and lie in dark in bed. Knives and picks and needles ~ stab deep in to the brain, The agony they cause, can drive you near insane. The mind cannot function when enduring such distress. ~ I have eaten too much chocolate, and I now I must confess. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Haahaa! You are one silly Earth Angel!! Enjoyed! Thanks for the smile!! JL |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
EA: Had to come back and tell you to visit this link: http://www.hersheys.com/ Chocolate!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh nooo! Dear Linda, can one feel that bad because of chocolate ... too high a price to pay for moments of paradise!? I wonder will we have chocolate up there ?? hmmmmm And to your sweet confession I add mine ... I have had SOME chocolate secretly today when I actually proclamed in the morning that I was NOT touching any today .... Thank you for the smiles! Love and hugs. Margherita : |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh wahhhh... and I just indulged in a Dove dark chocolate! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
OOOHHHHH, this sounds like the headache I've got right now, Linda Lou!! I can't decide if it's sinus infection It's raining bad here), or if it's migraine... or if it's because I haven't eaten anything yet today. Whatever it is caused by sure does hurt!! And, you described it perfectly. I do confess though, that I've been eating chocolate a lot lately...not today yet, though. If you're feeling this now, I hope it's better real soon. Hugs, Ethel |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Just Yummy ! Hugs, Chris |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
My grain is runneth over My belly is so full Just keep the curtains closed My brain Thinks I'm a fool It sounds like a good migrain from eating chocolat. Dave |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Hahaha....cute and powerful! Eric |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
JL ~ I still have the migraine! A big price to pay for over-indulging. I don't know what came over me. I have rather good eating habits ~ but there was this box of chocolates saying, "Eat me! Eat me!" ~ and with me being such an obedient "angel", I obliged. I was upset over something and the feel-good hormones (serotonins) in chocolate helped ~ for the moment. Now I am paying the price ~ and I also have to work the calories off! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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JL ~ Oh, no! I cannot even look at chocolate right now! lol It's a sweet sight, I mean "site". I will investigate it further once I am feeling better! Have a good day! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Margherita ~ But of course, there will be chocoate up there! ~ and it will be calorie free and delicious! A little birdie told me that this is so! Your wish is God's command! lol On Earth, people who eat lots of chocolate together ~ grow fat together! lol Remember the saying, "A chocolate a day, keeps the doctor away!". Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Sunshine ~ Dark chocolate is acutally good for you! It has less sugar, more antioxidants, and lots of serotonin ~ plus a few more things that I can't remember at the moment because of my flippin' migraine. I think you'll be alright with just one dark choc. bar! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
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Ethel ~ I certainly do commiserate! I am so much better at helping others to heal than myself. I'll send you some distant healing to help ease your migraine. Sending you a bubble of green Light to surround you in healing rays, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Nightshade ~ Chris, would you like to finish my box of chocolates off for me? ~ Pretty please? Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dave ~ Thanks for the humorous poetic reply! Yeppers, I think you are correct in that assumption ~ a chocolate-induced migraine! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Eric ~ Glad you got a kick out the poem! lol Mind you, I feel as though a horse kicked me in the head! Oh, well. Another lesson learned! ~ don't eat so much chocolate all at once! lol Linda |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
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Last line jumped me. Clever Poets against the war is redundant |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
LOL .... loved this... you had me going there for a minute, silly sweetloving Earth Angel! *hugs you*......jo |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Sometimes I think she's my long lost sister.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel You mean the dark choclate did that? I know you can eat a little of anything but I don't know about allot. I'll send Randy dragon over to help you burn up the bad. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hehehe....cute one here |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFLMAO... I was feeling sorry for you, thinking you had the flu... then learn your misery is self-induced... I've been there... and it's icky! LOL Thanks for the grins! *G* |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
I sure got a kick out of this one!!! Here I was thinking all serious. A most painful argument of some sort or something. Well, until the last line anyway,... but, hey, I do guess over eating chocolates can be a very serious thing too. Loved it. -Bob |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(giggles in delight) Hehehe, you really had me going there, as I was afraid you were sad or something, only to giggle at the end in delight, yay! (giggles) Chocolate is one of my biggest weaknesses too, I love almost every kind of chocolate and it can get me real giggly when I play games with my families and be innocently competitive, hehehe! (smiles) I love this, sweet friend, yay, now have some peanut butter instead, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Too cute, Linda! I hope you feel better soon. I confess a little chocolate caper today myself, nibbling around a chocolate chip cookie...and just eating the chips out of it, throwing away the rest. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Chocolate is my favorite! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Oh, you had me Linda - I am like "what's this? My sweet happy Earth Angel writing the blues! But that ending - lol - oh yeah, been there - hope to be there again - who can ever eat too much chocolate? No matter the severe consequences Hugs girl - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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