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Adored (Acrostic)
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Adored (Acrostic) |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
My first Acrostic...Thank you Nightshade for the inspire. Adored. Always is my love for you true. Determined is my heart to make you mine. Over each obstacle I climb. Rallying all my strength to earn your love. Eternally I strive to protect your heart. Delicately my kisses caress your lips. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Nice love write, putting it on parchment for Valentine's? A fine acrostic, the lines really fit the word! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes..beautifully done  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
scorpio Adored is a wonderful love word...your poem is beautiful and love inspired, it would seem. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I love these poems. You did well and made me smile Juju |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ah, scorpio, this is indeed a beautiful Acrostic, and I am thrilled that I inspired you to write one. I am popping this into my library straight away. hugs, Chris ~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~ |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Kacy. Valentine's Day..hmm..I hadn't thought that far ahead. Thank you Susan for your kind comments. Martie, yes it was love inspired. Thank you. Glad it made you smile Juju. Thanks. I was very impressed with your acrostic Chris. And I had to try it. Thank you for your inspiration and support. believe in what your heart feels... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Scorpio, this is so beautiful. I really enjoy reading these, but I just can't seem to put one together right. Hugs, Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
bravo!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You know Scorpio...for your first attempt at an Acrostic.. This one is EXCELLENT!!! Very very well done! Whomever the lady is that you were thinking about when you wrote this is very lucky indeed! ~Smiles, Hugs & Luv ya!~ In the midst of winter, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Well done my friend. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Ethel. Acrostics are fun. Don't give up. Dixie thank you. Nancy glad you liked this first attempt. I certainly will explore this style again. And I'm the lucky one!!  Thank you Sy. I appreciate your kind comments and support. believe in what your heart feels... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You do that so well~ Nice one, scorpio~ |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I LOVE THIS!~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
How sweet and romantic~ADORABLE ~ARH  Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Lori. Kind of you to say so. Glad you liked it Alli!! ARH thank you for your kind words of support. believe in what your heart feels... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sigh......enjoyed your romantic heart! ........jo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Absolutely lovely, dear scorpio. And I especially appreciated to read "Always IS my love for you true." ...it suggests you are truly aware of love's eternal existence. Love IS. Very nice indeed. Love, Margherita |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
like all the other good going |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
WELL DONE! A beautiful construction... INclan |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you iliana. Most kind of you. Margherita thank you for your kind words. Thanks MGROVE. I appreciate your support. INclan thank your for encouragement. Much appreciated. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, Sir... a perfect gift for her heart...on Valentine's Day |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You should be proud of your first attempt, very nicely done! |
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