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JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA

0 posted 2005-01-12 04:34 PM


Malfunctioning Thought

Imagination might be infatuation doting destination
if ones palpitation within their own reality
would apply connotation of that prospect
therefore redeploying thought
into motion…

But what thought causes action?

A definer…
Or faux pas?

“To be or not to be”
Action words, no action taken
Except by selling War Bonds as
Carol Lombard and Jack Benny.
“Who’s got the skinny?”
or
“Dipody-Do-Da-Day”
So many words with no action can make a dull boy a little too lazy…
Made me justify life in a nutshell, due to no time in the bottle.Hey?
“Makes me crazy!”


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-01-12 04:42 PM



*Smiling*

Though processes on the merry-go-round, hey?
Enjoyed the ride, JL...

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

2 posted 2005-01-12 05:27 PM


In the hazy lazy days of summer
We sang in barber shop quartets
We ease along the defined path
Paid to blend outlets

Rocking the boat was not allowed
Gay was "farewell bligh spirit"

Now a rarified understanding
Is blasted to a 15 second fame

Art Decor now seems life
And life
As always

Smiles

For life is life

Dave

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-01-13 06:45 AM


and the reality is the fantasy...jumping back and forth between two very mature adults who play as children....

time in a bottle...floats forever, taking us with it for awhile...never taking us to places others go...but our own place, our own time...destiny ROCKS!!!!!

Its all in how one looks at things

JL, you ROCK....in my book

hugs

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
4 posted 2005-01-13 06:47 PM


  Much enjoyed, JL!
Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
5 posted 2005-01-16 12:06 PM


Oh yeah - smiling at this - playful wisdom

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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