Open Poetry #34 |
You utter words |
DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
JL mention an idea for words. The Window Cleaner and a dirty dusty was not appropriate so I had to go for words. From the words that had nice suggestion. You utter words Flowing across an inner vision unencumbered by care control restriction you fly Decorating an horizon with whatever Dave ***************************************** Words fight against a flow of inhibitions driven by fear that someone reads your words All you see is in your head and you see more than most Your inner vision visualises nerve jumps that pump and punch you Drawing words on figments of ideas of thoughts you buried that rear their heads allowing no peace Taking wrong paths to free words in your soul that habit forming lose one of what you feel are "many souls" Vibrant communication stimulating you alive to face a dead audience that would never know your words To it's final death and fiddles play and communication stays In the death of play Of words With meaning Ever to be stayed |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Your inner vision visualises nerve jumps that pump and punch you that ol 3rd little eye getting saucy again David, this was great...enjoyed |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
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Lee First person in over 40 years to have made that comment. It sounds almost Lobsang Rampa. Dave |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
You-Da-Man! Great write DavePage. Enjoyed, enjoyed, enjoyed. . JL |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thanks JL. Dave |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank goodness for JL's push... Dang, Dave... it's ALL true... sigh. Thank you! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
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Thanks Sunshine but I write stuff at times and I come back and it doesn't seem like me, yet it is me and personal thoughts on the barriers we fight to write the words. I suppose I remember trying to break them and felt no-one understood. Now I know that everyone understood. I was the one who didn't. regards Dave |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Your words are an invitation to overcome this kind of inhibitions ... Ohhhhh, I have a vision of an infinite series of doors opening one after one .... how far can we dare to go and release the flow of words without restrictions? Thank you for this thoughtful write, Dave! Love, Margherita |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
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Thanks Margherita Sometimes maybe it works Take care Dave |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
well i definetly know about writing something and going back and reading it and it dont sound like i could of written it. thanks for the understanding of words and the inspiration to look beyond the words |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very cool write |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Marsha and Passing Thanks for the comments. When I was writing a previous reply is was almost like Barry Manilow singing "if someone would have said 'you're not so bad'". Being different is never easy and if you have any talent it is almost as if you are thrown out of a circle because people have these ideas of structures and limits and not trying. Thanks Dave |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Wow! I like this. :-) Within this heart you'll find love |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
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Thanks Froggy Much appreciated Dave |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I like your honesty, Dave. So much insight! ......jo |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
came back again for a little insight |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thanks. I try to be honest. Dave |
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