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Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2005-01-11 09:04 PM

There is alot of words
in the dictionary
Among all of these words
was music of the sheres

Celestrial bodies
Thought to have made music
I thought this was stupid
and shut the book of words

I walked out in the cold
and stared at the sparse stars
So if there was music
maybe I could hear it.

The pathagrians lied
Clouds covered the last stars
Now how could I listen
A jet passed above me.

Juju

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2005-01-11 10:29 PM

I like this - made me smile - I miss my stars on my mountain, where you could see layer upon layer, and the milky way would streak it's white texture cross the dark -

now if I see five or six stars, am thrilled -

Ah, and the military planes circle over head too - used to be cool when one would see the B52s, now it's mostly C135s - ah well -

Enjoyed -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2005-01-11 10:33 PM

Interesting prospective, Juju.

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

3 posted 2005-01-11 10:38 PM

I think the music is elicited
Keep listening.

P.S.
Watch your spelling.

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

4 posted 2005-01-12 06:29 PM

I like this for the irony, message and feeling.

Dave

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

5 posted 2005-01-12 08:23 PM

Susan- Yeah I know lack of stars stinks. I kinda did cover a few topics huh? lol oh well. I was reading the dictionary for inspiration and such and messages ran though my head and such well you get the idea.

Illiana- Hi! haent seen much from you nice to hear from you. I know this one wasn't as good as my other ones, and actually I think I maybe could of done better but neh.

Huan Yi- I am sorry about the spelling a few words wrong. I was kinda lazy. I think this is the first one of my poems you responded to.

Dave page- I am glad you like it. I think this ios your first time responding to one of my poems as well. glad to get new readers lol.

Lots of love,
Juju

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

6 posted 2005-01-13 09:51 AM

I enjoyed this too - makes me think about all the beautiful fields covered by concrete. (not that I'd want to get rid of all the concrete

)

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

7 posted 2005-01-13 01:12 PM

Copperbel- I am glad you enjoyed this.

Juju

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

8 posted 2005-01-13 07:12 PM

I love this Juju!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

9 posted 2005-01-13 08:50 PM

Well thank you alli!

-Juju

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