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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
In desires of the chance to demonstrate talent that drives you inwards In desires of your thoughts begining a journey that is not encapsulated with yourself In desires of your knowledge of the talent no one believes you know of your talent In desires of a bad day you have your worth talent and skill In your feelings of yourself you feel you have talent and by being different you open your world to a failure to conform Directed by many understood by few You utter words Flowing across an inner vision unencumbered by care control restriction you fly Decorating an horizon with whatever Dave |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Decorating the horizon with whatever - yes - and so beautifully done -  Susanbtw - who wants to conform? Not I - my mama always said, be the engine, not the caboose  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
directed by many understood by few i have felt this or should i say lived this good one, thanks for sharing  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This member of Piptalk thanks you!  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and we all find our privet freedoms.... Bravo my friend, standing here lighting a candle..... Marvelous |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DavePage "Flowing across an inner vision unencumbered by care control restriction you fly Decorating an horizon with whatever" Yes! Much enjoyed! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Decorating an horizon with whatever Exactly! Thank you for this one... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Decorating an horizon with whatever" I too was captured by this last line. Prolific for the artist’s mind to ponder. I hope you expand on this line making it the title of your next write. Excellent thoughts here. JL |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Susan Thanks Susan. I do slipstream a bit more these days and I know I need to nuckle down on the technical stuff. MGROVES i have felt this or should i say lived this good one, thanks for sharing It is a bit typecast that anyone writing poetry has a problem and is unable to open the curtains in a single room. I always thought that was another profession - lawyers, accountants, city bankers, dentists, doctors and of course journalists. passing shadows A nice cheer. Sunshine Thank you Sunshine and everyone. Without you we wouldn't have the opportunity or the freedom to write. LeeJ Thanks Lee. I need to get back to reviewing others work but I am on a detailed treadmill to get work that pays. Martie Moderator "Flowing across an inner vision unencumbered by care control restriction you fly Decorating an horizon with whatever" Yes! Much enjoyed! Martie Without the moderators this site would degenerate. No-one gives the credit to people like yourself who keep the site as it is. You have my thanks. Gentle Spirit To seek a chance to dream (stolen words from a poet). Thanks JL "Decorating an horizon with whatever" I too was captured by this last line. Prolific for the artist’s mind to ponder. I hope you expand on this line making it the title of your next write. Excellent thoughts here. JL Decorating an horizon with whatever I'll take this as a theme but Red started 38 years ago with me holding a pint of Youngs RamRod and Special in my hand. It almost seems like a theme for a window cleaner with a dirty cloth. I'll give it some thought but no promises. Thanks everyone. Dave |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
*smiling* and you do PIPtalk proud |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write Dave..enjoyed this as I do all that you share with us. Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
jellybeans Piptalk does Piptalk proud by honesty and allowing the right to write. Enchantress In the midst of winter, I found there lives within me.. an invincible summer. In the summer I often felt the chill of winter's thoughts In spring I decorated my eyes with vision Thanks Dave |
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