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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Years later Dusk still glitters On lingering moonlight Platonic abstract terms Sounding human More beautiful then ever In spite of everything Conscious forming letters Translating madness Death sentence stepping beyond Feeling emptied of everything Motionless sun & the sea…you & me Earthlight’s flesh of unity Pressed against the greatest translation Are my red cheeks undermine Hands touching them for the first time Surrealism becomes me On the forehead of connection Walking in the footsteps of desire Where mysterious reclaims beauty Somewhere on a mountain peak In Virginia, in late summer of 03 Did tomorrow disappear? Where the end of life became Potential purity Inside your mind You slept on my skirt Where a handrail of midst Compliments any dream beyond all sound You said our whitewashed walls Were only for the moment But what if that moment lasted a lifetime? In the thatch of sheen Where sun lay high in the sky We lean against immortal sacrifice Vacationing in our minds Visioning our circle isle Shall we swim together toward shore Or let the ocean carry us Toward an extravagant world Where we face each other for a while Looking deep into our eyes Where even wounds do not look Moments tremble As I write to you again Once again, mystical pulls itself up Into the sways of passion Yours and mine Performing our fate In the name of positive knowledge Metaphysically worthy Of side by side I smile at your success Strangely not jealous She is a woman of fine art One of which you’ll not tire |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Years later Dusk still glitters On lingering moonlight Platonic abstract terms Sounding human More beautiful then ever In spite of everything ~*~ You could have stopped here and I would have been quite pleased...  Something to be said about late bloomers... |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
this is really beautiful  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"In the thatch of sheen Where sun lay high in the sky We lean against immortal sacrifice Vacationing in our minds Visioning our circle isle" Deep emotion alive in this write. Very nice lee J. JL |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
Have to agree with you on women being fine art(soulfisher stops to cast a giant grin).Glad you shared this poem today. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
LeeJ - this is breathtaking -  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Lee The imagery portrayed throughout was simply outstanding. A fine masterpiece you have shared with us. Take care.........Sue I am in motion |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
All of this is an exceptional plate. These lines tugged at me. Shall we swim together toward shore Or let the ocean carry us Toward an extravagant world Where we face each other for a while Looking deep into our eyes Where even wounds do not look Moments tremble As I write to you again |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
BEAUTIFUL! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I liked this poem. Juju |
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saved_by_grace Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332In the arms of God... |
ABSOULUTELY BEAUTIFUL, LeeJ! Becka |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Lee, have I ever told you I love the way you see the world? |
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