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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-01-10 09:52 AM

I watch the flames, heated to perfection,
at least for the moment's need.
I do my winter walk, with a dance in my step
believing in the artistry of you,
waltzing my words in the shadows of the night.

Thoughts rise with me in the mornings,
hesitating the real, wishing to be
the child of the flames, to rumor me bad.

I mull over words that escape
from the breath of me, the inspiration
from within minded walls, your touch
an added attraction allowing
the familiar to cross the plane

and spell out these feelings~~
M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (01-10-2005 12:11 PM).]

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2005-01-10 10:12 AM

Maureen - your heart shows when you write.
Hugs to you dear lady. Chris

~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

Soulfisher
Member

since 2005-01-07

Posts 226
where ever the fly fishing is good

2 posted 2005-01-10 10:14 AM

Mareen nice write and hows your head?

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2005-01-10 10:15 AM

Maureen,

just because.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2005-01-10 10:23 AM

Lovely this...lovely you.
Muche enjoyed Maureen.
Hugs~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
an invincible summer.

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

5 posted 2005-01-10 01:22 PM

I like this one.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2005-01-10 01:48 PM

Thanks everyone..

I have been dealing with a non functioning furnace and for 3 weeks now have been waiting a plumber who knew what to do with one that was put in either 1947 or 1949 ~laughing~ at all the responses I got from heating experts...once they were able to see it.

3 weeks ago I awoke to very hot temps in the house when the boiler wouldn't cut off...and also was checked and had some gas leakage, necessity being to shut of the gas and have no heat...since then I have been sawing, stacking and stoking wood for my woodstove( at least I had one)..and it sure is tiresome, besides cold depending on where I am standing...I am lucky that in the mid eastern states our temperatures except for nighttime have been above normal..

So until (hopefully) tomorrow I get to watch the flames and keep them burning

Maureen

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

7 posted 2005-01-10 03:22 PM

Hmm I can feel that nice warm fire ....

lovely Maureen

Maree.

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

8 posted 2005-01-10 03:26 PM

Oh my...I know what that can be like...Stay warm and keep writing...this poem is a treasure...*hugs*

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

9 posted 2005-01-10 03:31 PM

Wonderful write!
Enjoyed the story.

JL

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

10 posted 2005-01-10 07:12 PM

Very nice . . .

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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