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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2005-01-10 08:00 AM


Just Because I Truly Do Love You

Somewhere past nowhere
I started missing you.
The dance music was
playing way too loud
and I remembered how
much you loved listening
to Donna Summer singing,
She Works Hard For Her Money,
and playing her in your phone
messages to me, and for a
brief moment I couldn't hear
the cock-a-doodle doo as your
neighbors rooster crowed in
the background, and then you'd
laugh and tell me that you were
mad at me, but that was allright
because first I was mad at you,
but through it all you still told
me that you loved me and as you
pressed me I wanted to say I love
you too, and I did (at last) just
because I truly do love you.

JamesLee
January10
2005


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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2005-01-10 09:23 AM


beautiful JamesM


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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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2 posted 2005-01-10 09:41 AM


James, I cannot believe the pastel colors that show through this reading warmth and understaning...lovely
froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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Michigan
3 posted 2005-01-10 01:26 PM


Beautifully written.

:-)

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2005-01-10 03:09 PM


Mature love...I could see more of your heart being spilled out in this one....

Lovely~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


Startime55
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5 posted 2005-01-10 03:27 PM


*sigh* romantically beautiful...A wonderful expression of true love...

*Alli4000*
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6 posted 2005-01-10 07:13 PM


I love this!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2005-01-10 07:19 PM


Very nice James...romantic indeed.
Hugs~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
an invincible summer.

Ratleader
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8 posted 2005-01-19 10:43 PM


A fella doesn't really need a reason, you'd think...but he does. Women use that word too easily at times, but a man says it solely to lift one of two things....skirts or hearts, depending whether he's actually a man, or an overgrown boy.....

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saved_by_grace
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In the arms of God...
9 posted 2005-01-19 10:53 PM


Beautiful read, James!   Thanks for sharing your heart here.

And VERY true comment, Ratleader!!


Becka :}

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