Open Poetry #34 |
Head/Heart |
Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
From head to heart moving and they’re miles apart two traffic lights coloured and flashing stop/start. One settled and staid not wanting to change, the other aggressive in the quietest of ways. One has short views, the other enlarged and extending beyond the white line of life but I turn a bright yellow when caught in the middle and stall, simply stall, evolution of soul. I can flutter around testing the ground and I’ve done that so long; where do I belong? Static and fixed in analytical mode with pros and cons listed in my mental realms or go with the flow of a vulnerable heart? Decisions! Decisions! But throw love in the hat and it all comes together just like that! I’m still in the middle reliant on each and from yellow to orange, fluorescent orange, a total eclipse of me. But I prefer blue and that’s wonderful too because head/heart together … could you ever love me? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
who couldn't love you Helen? |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Dixie - I guess that would be the man I love. Such is life. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
the head and the heart tend to confuse each other alot dont they? as if they each speak separate languages.. the head can be misleading.. can the heart be? |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
I like this one. :-) |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"I can flutter around testing the ground and I’ve done that so long; where do I belong?" Outstanding Write! Enjoyed to the MAX! JL |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Nice write! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
So well said! Yes, the constant struggle. & love, jo |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Oh, a belated thank you to all for reading. I must have been stuck in the middle of something somewhere or other. |
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