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Soulfisher
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where ever the fly fishing is good

0 posted 2005-01-10 01:45 AM

Do you hear the blues serenade
the gentle spirit of an earth angel
as down she lay evocotive verse2 you

Be passionately romantic
in naked thoughts
of her romantic heart.
As she taste the taste
of another tequila sunrise
by the sea

But does she now of my hopes
in saved by grace to be a poet devine
or will her love be a gunslinger
spewing forth the ratleader of love
hear it ring as it strikes copperbell
watch it flutter as a snow flake from hell
this encantress of a foxy oasis in #34'S cabin
shall i say less or shall i say more mr. tabin
sorry I couldnt be found honey bunch
as I was soul fishing for purity
in a Puddle of green itchy stuff.
With the whistling windsong of a winter wren
piping melody in my midnight sun.
I found we were mere passing shadows
in night shades serenade.
oh but a few pulls from ole southerns jug
left me feelin froggy dont you know
and martie you never looked so good.
(couldnt resist the urge to play with everyones names)

[This message has been edited by Soulfisher (01-10-2005 02:19 PM).]

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

1 posted 2005-01-10 02:02 AM

What a little tale you have told....but you left out the soulfisher who searches for souls...

~ARh

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!

Soulfisher
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where ever the fly fishing is good

2 posted 2005-01-10 02:07 AM

aparently not as your swallowing hook line and stinker I mean sinker

passing shadows
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displaced

3 posted 2005-01-10 06:04 AM

that's pretty neat

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

4 posted 2005-01-10 09:12 AM

Be passionately romantic
in naked thoughts
of her romantic heart.

It is enjoyable to read these~~ fun to read those with titles too, that others post...

thanks for including me ~sort of~

M/nakdthoughts

SEA

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with you

5 posted 2005-01-10 09:14 AM

I always love it when folks do these! It's so creative and so much fun to read. Great job with this

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

6 posted 2005-01-10 09:16 AM

This is a fun read and I appreciate
seeing my name included as well.

Nicely done...very nice indeed.
Hugs~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
an invincible summer.

LeeJ
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7 posted 2005-01-10 09:42 AM

Just goes to show you, the connection...brilliantly done

saved_by_grace
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In the arms of God...

8 posted 2005-01-10 09:53 AM

That was a great read, Soulfisher!

VERY creative...thanks for posting!!

Becka

Soulfisher
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where ever the fly fishing is good

9 posted 2005-01-10 10:11 AM

Passing shadow sorry for not working you in the poem until after you had read it.

Naked thoughts wish i could say sorry for sandwiching you between the romance of heart and passion but I'd be lying

Sea and Enchantres thanks for letting me use your names

LeeJ thank you for your feed back

Saved by grace thanks for adding grace to my pages

froggy
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10 posted 2005-01-10 01:21 PM

Cool read and write.

:-)

suthern

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11 posted 2005-01-10 01:38 PM

Very creative... I enjoyed! *S*

Midnitesun

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Gaia

12 posted 2005-01-10 01:43 PM

LOL, like your 'stinker' reply. And I enjoyed this bit of poesy very much.

Martie

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13 posted 2005-01-10 01:51 PM

Enjoyed this Soulfisher...even though you left me out....pout! Just kidding! I haven't written anything for awhile...due to persnickety muse.

Soulfisher
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where ever the fly fishing is good

14 posted 2005-01-10 02:24 PM

martie suthern and froggy welcome to the lines of my poem.

mid night sun you little stinker I'll make ya a great thinker oh have you cheked the fluid in your car blinker...(you'll need a left handed pipe wrench for this)

Startime55
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15 posted 2005-01-10 03:38 PM

*giggling with delight* a fine vision of fun you weave with your talented words...A true joy for all to read...

Nightshade

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just out of reach

16 posted 2005-01-10 04:12 PM

Well done indeed! enjoyed & thanks. Chris

~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

JL
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17 posted 2005-01-10 05:02 PM

Heehee..

Good one, Soulfisher.

JL

*Alli4000*

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The World of Poetry

18 posted 2005-01-10 06:29 PM

Enjoyed this! ^_^

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

EvocativeVerse2
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19 posted 2005-01-10 06:46 PM

Cute Soulfisher. Thank-you for including my nick.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Susan
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walking the surreal

20 posted 2005-01-10 07:05 PM

the poem was a fun read, and the replies a kick too - enjoyed

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside

21 posted 2005-01-12 02:29 AM

Delightful poem, Soulfisher.
Nice that you noticed the background music too.
Gee, thanks~

Soulfisher
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where ever the fly fishing is good

22 posted 2005-01-12 03:35 AM

No thank you for serenading my soul so blue and thanks all for stoping in to read and comment. Hope yall have a good one.

Gentle Spirit
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23 posted 2005-01-12 11:18 AM

A lovely blending of poetic voices you have gifted Passions with. Very nicely done,
and thank you.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

24 posted 2005-01-12 11:21 AM

That's the way to get your feet wet, Sir...
just jump right in to the bayou!

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