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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside

0 posted 2005-01-10 12:44 PM



Recalling the years, and the friends that I've made,
seems only fitting I would look back at you.
The friendship we shared, was so rare and so true
and I picture you there, somewhere over the rainbow.

For the memories we made are golden to me.

That time passing by, has stayed with me always
and I thought of you then, as I think of you now.
No matter how far the distance and space in between
I can see you so clearly, remembering when.

While carving your place, in the heart of my keep.


~In memory of a forever friend~

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1 posted 2005-01-10 12:53 PM


Some people are just that way for us....a rare and beautiful thing but the're there. Everyone should have at least one forever-friend...the lucky ones more maybe, but everybody should have one.

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BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2005-01-10 01:15 AM


Thank you Ed for always knowing~  
He and his family had a great impact on my life.  
In my heart, he and they, will remain as close as close can be,  forever.

Honeybunch
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3 posted 2005-01-10 01:27 AM


What a lovely tribute.  Yes, friends are special and the forever ones even more so.
A Romantic Heart
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4 posted 2005-01-10 01:40 AM


I could feel your devotion throughout this poem, your love and kindness overflows~

Friends are a treasure!

~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


Soulfisher
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5 posted 2005-01-10 02:01 AM


glad to see your not clad in tears today little miss blue
passing shadows
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6 posted 2005-01-10 06:05 AM


this ....touching


Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2005-01-10 08:22 AM


ms bluzzzzzy

your heart is big
room for many friends

this was a roomfull

LeeJ
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8 posted 2005-01-10 08:28 AM


your beautiful inside as well as out!!!!

Loved this

nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2005-01-10 09:06 AM


It's always sad to lose a friend...especially
a "long time" one. Knowing it doesn't make it easier...but I am always here if you need me


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10 posted 2005-01-18 12:49 PM


I have a feeling that a bunch of people missed this in the rush of things....and it's too good to have only nine responses...too much you, for that.

So up this beauty goes.....


.....and her poem!

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inkedgoddess
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11 posted 2005-01-18 01:54 PM


i know that place too, over the rainbow where they are still waving at you, letting your know
Gentle Spirit
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12 posted 2005-01-18 03:19 PM


I know this place and Lori
I am sure there are some very special angels
waiting to slide on rainbows...

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
13 posted 2005-01-18 04:03 PM


Thanks to you all for your kind and caring replies!  
Over the rainbow is bittersweet, if only I could reach him.

vandana
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14 posted 2005-01-18 04:53 PM


good write
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