Three Faces Of Eternity: Alchemy

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Open Poetry #34

Three Faces Of Eternity: Alchemy

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2005-01-09 12:39 PM

Three Faces Of Eternity: Alchemy

Throughout the fane of enchanted wishes
A bearer of gifts and soldier of riches
Called up in satin smoke that clings the edge on sacred stroke
Summer spirits taste of mint and maple
Tease the lips with light and able
Special-ness the theme of such uncharted dream

Astir within my soul
To knead the seed and birth of life more whole
A garden tender just for this
Picked meadow grains that sway of bliss
Come ripe and flowing sweet the juice
Succumb the moist of summer’s kiss

In grace that let in whisper touch my skin
Brought out to shine where shadows dim
And give the breeze reprieves so slim and lingered long
Astir the passing days still shiver length accord so strong
In palace guard the promised shard illume
By potions writ of single notions fit the spirit room

Copyright Kkh 01/09/05

Soulfisher
Member

since 2005-01-07

Posts 226
where ever the fly fishing is good

1 posted 2005-01-09 12:59 PM

whew your little fingers are on fire with this one. nicely done

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2005-01-09 01:06 PM

I must agree....almost a chanting of some
mystery in the alchemy you have stirred up
for our delight. Well done SnowQueen of
Northern Lights.

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2005-01-09 01:13 PM

A magical chant that sings within the reader...I loved the flow and feel of this beauty...

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2005-01-09 03:24 PM

your words eternal in tribute to this respite undisturbed

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2005-01-09 03:44 PM

Amazing write!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

6 posted 2005-01-09 08:19 PM

you already know

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

7 posted 2005-01-10 02:52 PM

Bea-U-T-Full.

JL

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2005-01-10 03:04 PM

Astir within my soul
To knead the seed and birth of life more whole
A garden tender just for this
Picked meadow grains that sway of bliss
Come ripe and flowing sweet the juice
Succumb the moist of summer’s kiss

Wow, wow, wow....this is a master piece....lovely writting Lady Jane

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