Open Poetry #34 |
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Fading Out |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion ![]() |
Was a lifetime worth it all? The rise right before the fall. I'm fading out alone. Starting to feel the bitterness of alone, And as we speak we turn to stone. I think I'm fading out alone. I can't go on without you, I don't know what else to do. And I'm fading out alone. Was a lifetime worth it all? Yes..you're worth it all. I'm fading out alone.... does your fire burn? can you hear me? ILL JUST KNOCK THIS WALL RIGHT DOWN |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Snowflake you sound terribly down. Now that's no way to start the New Year! "Pick yourself up .... dust yourself off...and start all over again." ![]() ~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Hot Flakes, this may sound rather cavalier of me, but "off with the old and on with the new"! You sure have a way of expressing yourself that grabs your readers! ![]() EA |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
![]() I wish I could say something that would make everything easy- There's a time to grieve in life and a time to move forward. A person needs to grieve. You know what Kyle, one of the biggest lessons I've learned in life is to learn how to be whole without a partner. It was so hard because I felt so dependant, but I needed to explore who I was and I needed to heal, and I needed to learn to love myself. It took time and faith, but I did and I'm so glad - the love I have is stronger than it ever would have been had I not gone through the process. Take care - ![]() |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Pain fills each word of this poem....I have to concure with all those before me...life does continue and the heart does heal in time...Copperbell said it perfectly...remember many share your pain and understand how you feel... |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I too must agree with copperbell - what wise words - this aches and it reaches and touches others - I felt it deeply and it is well understood - you are so not alone in being alone - ![]() If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
heh...if i could live without this girl i wouldnt have wrote this does your fire burn? can you hear me? ILL JUST KNOCK THIS WALL RIGHT DOWN |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sending hugs your way Kyle. ![]() In the midst of winter, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
after awhile, you get use to alone...and you never take companionship for granted ever again~~ have a hug M |
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