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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2005-01-09 08:04 AM

The bath

I took a bath within the light
To wash away the shades of night
I took it with the dew of dawn
To clean me for the coming morn

I toweled myself with puffs of clouds
That wrapped me in a white of shroud
Then laid me down a field of green
And watched the wonder of the scene

The flowers raised their heads to view
Catching up the suns ecru
Matching colors of the sky
And then the birds began to fly

My spirits rose within the air
To greet the kingdom I was heir
And in the forest of the trees
I danced the dance of living leaves

All within a moments grace
God I really love this place

Soulfisher
Member

since 2005-01-07

Posts 226
where ever the fly fishing is good

1 posted 2005-01-09 08:20 AM

the dawn of morn ushering in the kingdom by light of the word,flowers follow to show their radiace in him. nice thought for the morn

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2005-01-09 08:26 AM

Good morning! I saved this beauty immediately lest I forgot!

Mr. T. this poem is totally delightful and refreshing. I especially enjoy your poems of Light and whimsy and fantasy!

Loveyamuchly,
EA

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2005-01-09 08:41 AM

yes it's a lovely place
and so glad i jumped in your bath
this morning

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

4 posted 2005-01-09 09:10 AM

What a wonderful way to start a morning Sy!!! Very inspiring.

believe in what your heart feels...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2005-01-09 09:11 AM

...and you're the reason and the why
the Sun is shining in the sky...

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2005-01-09 09:42 AM

I toweled myself with puffs of clouds
That wrapped me in a white of shroud
Then laid me down a field of green
And watched the wonder of the scene

The flowers raised their heads to view
Catching up the suns ecru
Matching colors of the sky
And then the birds began to fly

My spirits rose within the air
To greet the kingdom I was heir
And in the forest of the trees
I danced the dance of living leaves

All within a moments grace
God I really love this place
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Sweet Sy-guy your words make me high!!
You say in ryhme divine what I feel at the creek everytime.

Mark this one for your book project!!
(Im sure a moth I know has just the right pics)

*ww*

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2005-01-09 09:59 AM

Soulfisher
Just a bowl of water and a towel, glad you enjoyed.

Earth Angel
Your reply after my shower was a delight.

inkedgoddess
Jumped in my bath, you make me blush LOL.

scorpio
Once again, thank you my friend.

Sunshine
And I love you too. Hugs

JM,
Send me the pic and I'll put it with the poem. Winkiewinkie stinky

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2005-01-09 10:27 AM

good write

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2005-01-09 11:12 AM

vandana
Thank you my dear.

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

10 posted 2005-01-09 01:59 PM

You bring to vivid life a place where the soul goes to rest and dream of better worlds where love blossoms in every heart and peace fills the air...I love the vision you paint and go there often in my thoughts...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2005-01-09 02:22 PM

Splendid the read, and so awesome the ride,
Sir Sy...thank you.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

12 posted 2005-01-09 02:50 PM

What a wonderful and relaxing "bath" of
your words, my friend.
Hugs,

Ethel

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

13 posted 2005-01-10 01:45 PM

My spirits rose within the air
To greet the kingdom I was heir
And in the forest of the trees
I danced the dance of living leaves

To find such magic, even in the mundane... How beautiful this is... and you are! *S*

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

14 posted 2005-01-10 06:20 PM

Startime55
Your comments are a delight to read.

Magnus
Thank you my friend.

Ethel,
You are a dear.

suthern
You are a love.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

15 posted 2005-01-12 05:30 AM

yes!

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