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| Open Poetry #34 |
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The Bath |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The bath I took a bath within the light To wash away the shades of night I took it with the dew of dawn To clean me for the coming morn I toweled myself with puffs of clouds That wrapped me in a white of shroud Then laid me down a field of green And watched the wonder of the scene The flowers raised their heads to view Catching up the suns ecru Matching colors of the sky And then the birds began to fly My spirits rose within the air To greet the kingdom I was heir And in the forest of the trees I danced the dance of living leaves All within a moments grace God I really love this place |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
the dawn of morn ushering in the kingdom by light of the word,flowers follow to show their radiace in him. nice thought for the morn |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
 Good morning! I saved this beauty immediately lest I forgot! Mr. T. this poem is totally delightful and refreshing. I especially enjoy your poems of Light and whimsy and fantasy! Loveyamuchly, EA  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes it's a lovely place and so glad i jumped in your bath this morning  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
What a wonderful way to start a morning Sy!!! Very inspiring. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...and you're the reason and the why the Sun is shining in the sky...    |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I toweled myself with puffs of clouds That wrapped me in a white of shroud Then laid me down a field of green And watched the wonder of the scene The flowers raised their heads to view Catching up the suns ecru Matching colors of the sky And then the birds began to fly My spirits rose within the air To greet the kingdom I was heir And in the forest of the trees I danced the dance of living leaves All within a moments grace God I really love this place ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sweet Sy-guy your words make me high!! You say in ryhme divine what I feel at the creek everytime.  Mark this one for your book project!! (Im sure a moth I know has just the right pics)  *ww*   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Soulfisher Just a bowl of water and a towel, glad you enjoyed. Earth Angel Your reply after my shower was a delight. inkedgoddess Jumped in my bath, you make me blush LOL. scorpio Once again, thank you my friend. Sunshine And I love you too. Hugs JM, Send me the pic and I'll put it with the poem. Winkiewinkie stinky |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good write |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana Thank you my dear. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
You bring to vivid life a place where the soul goes to rest and dream of better worlds where love blossoms in every heart and peace fills the air...I love the vision you paint and go there often in my thoughts... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Splendid the read, and so awesome the ride, Sir Sy...thank you. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
What a wonderful and relaxing "bath" of your words, my friend. Hugs, Ethel |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
My spirits rose within the air To greet the kingdom I was heir And in the forest of the trees I danced the dance of living leaves To find such magic, even in the mundane... How beautiful this is... and you are! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime55 Your comments are a delight to read. Magnus Thank you my friend. Ethel, You are a dear. suthern You are a love. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 yes! |
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