Open Poetry #34 |
A LOVERS LUST |
Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
A LOVERS LUST From a distance I saw you today. As anothers hand now reached for you and as if you were an exstension of his arm you reached his lips. I wonder if in those lips does your body still unfold in warm gentle silk? Does he find your sweet aroma dizzy in his mind still? As he taste you over and over again? Do you intoxicate his soul with your fragrant mist as he makes you burn? Till dawn brings rest to the graveyarders shift. Or does he taste the harsh burn of lungs? In that venemous taste as you brand another pawn. I wonder if he still feels your first kiss? That ushered secretly death upon its meet. Was well it worth? The grief of wife. As a fatherless world of one gets left behind. Would he taste of your bitter fruits again my love? Knowing your seduction is but smoke and mirror masking the slow death that awaits him. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-11-2005 01:36 PM).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
So sad. Lust has blinded many and ruined far more. |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
Morning Denise, and you are very right in your statement, as im referring to my lust of cigs. thanks for your reply |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My goodness! As I read this poem I was thinking that you were lucky to get out of that relationship alive! She sounds like a man eater! Then in one of your replies I read that you were referring to cigarettes! ~ I suppose my response still applies! lol This was an intriguing write! I really enjoyed reading it! ~ both times! The second time with the ciggy puffs as the femme fatale! Good morning to you! EA |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
Good morning to you to earth angel and I do apoligize if I BLEW SMOKE UP YOUR SKIRT THE FIRST TIME THRU. LOL |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I wonder if in those lips does your body still unfold in warm gentle silk? tender words among... double meanings alway make for a good read~~ thank you and welcome M |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So very clever your masterful write...the intoxication of smoke is such a powerful image...and I suspect what eludes to a love affair is quite right on. Write on. TD |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
WOW!! If you write with such passion about lust for cigs it will be interesting to see how you write about other topics...A stunning poem that draws the reader into your words... |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
MY INFATUATION FOR THE CIG COMES FROM THE COLD TURKEY OF LAST FRIDAY. SO FAR SO GOOD AND THANK YOU FOR THE REPLYS EVERYONE |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Ohhh yes I know that lustful temptation .... I stopped for 4 years and began again a year ago .... call me addictive LOL Hope |
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saved_by_grace Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332In the arms of God... |
Wow...good for you Soulfisher! I will be praying for you as you continue on your "cold turkey"! Nothing hurts more than to lose a loved one to an illness that could have been prevented. [I ought to know as we lost a dear loved one by the name of Auguste here due to those life stealers.] Keep your will to quit those horrible things and you will save yourself and family from a heartbreaking end. Good luck and God Speed.... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, blowin lots of smoke here, you are...but a wonderful write! Keep repeating after me... I am a nonsmoker I am a nonsmoker etc etc etc |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write..much enjoyed. And..you can do it..I quit over 10 years ago. I know the feeling, at first it was like losing my best friend. All the best to you! Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Enjoyed the write. You can do it...hang in there Soulfisher!! Smoking's a drag ... no pun intended. Chris ~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~ |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Well my critique is always gentle....as well as my touch~ So great to hear that you have quit smoking, and that you are penning poems about it, keep it up and you will overcome it. If you dream it, you can achieve it! ~Love and hugs Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that same New Year's resolution...every year I fail |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
Hope thanks for your comments and being an adictive reader Saved by grace thanks for reading my poem and sorry to hear about your loss. Midnite sun and enchantress thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. Night shade none of the pun takin a Romantic heart "I thought I told you to wait in the truck" LARRY THE CABLE GUY AND LAST BUT NOT LEAST PASSING SHADOWS REMEMBER TO TRY AND TRY AGAIN |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
enjoyed |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great write! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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