Open Poetry #34 |
The Morn of Rhyme (masked) |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I age the less the more of time And bring with me the morn of rhyme To wile away the seed of me And lift the day to pleasures be I climb the walls to reach the top A tease, a taunt, to never stop For age is just a "feel of when" (I like my tea to share and then) It is the morn, I specialize To whisper shine to all, surmise I am the fuel to start each day And wise the tries in nature's way I link from blue to blue to rose To many here I do propose In words to spirit, gently touch For here it is I love "the much" And always leave two lines behind Here within, I am defined M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Cant fool me, if this aint Seymour I'll be darned.... well done M!! The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
who else but our SY.......gotta be, can't be another....and you wrote it perfectly! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
You can't hide Seymore...Ya musta stole Maureens password! Nicely done, indeed! And thanks for playing! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh so well done Maureen! Tis our very own morning Sy guy! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You gave just the right clues! Terrific, Maureen! Sy will love it! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
hmmmm....there are so few of us that do rhyme consistantly in a pattern ...guess I didn't hide him well enough but who would want to thank you for allowing me to rhyme a bit today... hugs all M |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, that IS SY! *sigh* and no one has ever rhymed him better than you just did Maureen! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You make me smile~~~ thank you for the responses... and thank you SY (I always read and enjoy you) M |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
As I began to read, I felt I should have my tea by my side, what a beautiful job you have done writing SY, Maureen! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
You did a great job here Maureen Well DOne. Mxx and I am haunted |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
What the...? Sorry, Maureen, for a second I thought you were seymour! Great job. |
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